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They Come in Pairs - 10/?
Jack/Ianto
NC-17
set between 1x08 and 1x13




This chapter has proven to be really difficult for me, so I've sliced it in half so as not to leave you all hanging while I debate what to do with the coming scenes. I am not abandoning this story, but there might not be a part next week as I'm spending all my free time this weekend with the Roar fandom rather than working on it. Hope you all understand.


They Come in Pairs - 10

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"Owen, Gwen, you've got twenty seconds to change and be ready to move out," Jack shouted to them. "Tosh, that goes for you as well. Let's snap to it, kids."

He began pulling off his slime-coated shoes, dropping them in the garbage bag that Ianto was now holding. The jelly wasn't actually dangerous, but it gave off a rather powerful stench of sulfur when it dried. He wondered whether Ianto would even bother trying to remove it from their clothing. Seeing as he'd just thrown his shoes into a garbage bag, he highly doubted it.

There were some smears on his trousers as well, and he gave Ianto a look before stripping them off right in the middle of the Hub and slipping them into the bag. Toshiko tried to look like she wasn't looking at Jack as she disposed of her own boots. He mouthed, "To be continued," to Ianto, grinned suggestively at both him and Tosh, then darted up the stairs to his office.

He fetched a fresh pair of boots and clean trousers. Gwen, Owen, and Toshiko would be retrieving their spare clothing from Ianto's laundry room. Which Gwen really should have done earlier rather than spending the entire night in a dress, much to the amusement of Owen. Although had she done that, she'd be walking around half naked now, which would also likely please Owen. And there was something going on there, Jack wasn't blind.

Considering his own intentions regarding Ianto, however, Jack couldn't exactly object to inter-office liaisons.

He paused in lacing up his boot. He still needed to deal with the damn glove. The lace managed to tie itself into a knot that would be a bitch to get undone later, Jack unintentionally yanking it tight. He retrieved the glove from his drawer. It was cold to the touch, but warmth radiated when he slid his hand inside. So much for coincidental finger-related mishaps.

It was definitely still doing something. Jack wished like hell that he knew what. On the one hand, he might be transferring his own injuries to Ianto. But on the other, the link might be the only thing keeping Ianto alive. Fuck all if Jack knew.

The only certain thing was that it was still doing things it wasn't supposed to be doing, that should have stopped when the process was complete. It wasn't supposed to have permanently tied him and Ianto together. It was a one-off, nothing more. He should destroy the glove.

Or maybe he should just let this play out. With Jack's track record, he was bound to die again in the foreseeable future. If he passed a death along to Ianto and it broke their link, hey, no big deal. So long as Jack didn't destroy the glove, he could reuse it, bring Ianto right back again. Couldn't do that if he blasted the glove into a million little pieces.

Except that there was one thing they did know about the glove - it only worked once. "Fuck!"

Unless he'd just stumbled upon a damn bloody fantastic loophole. If Ianto were to die again with them still linked, Jack could possibly bring him back again without ever breaking the cycle. Which was twistedly appealing, Jack never having been one to play by the rules. They might be linked forever. Meaning Jack could keep him alive, well, forever.

Unless Ianto kept aging normally and Jack didn't, and wouldn't that just put a nasty kink in the whole eternity thing. Or Ianto could die again and the link would be severed, the glove becoming useless on him, and that would be that. Jack hated not knowing.

Logically, Jack knew he should destroy the glove. He couldn't walk out to the weapons locker and take care of things now, however. He needed Gwen, Owen, and Tosh to not be around, needed to think things through, decide if he wanted to tell Ianto before...

And how the hell was that conversation going to go down? It didn't play out very well in Jack's head. 'By the way, Ianto, you died, and I'll be destroying the glove now, so you've got a 50/50 shot of dropping dead... any last requests?'

Jack shoved the glove back into the drawer, slamming it shut. "Son of a bitch!" Jack shouted, then proceeded to kick the wall several times.

His headset buzzed to life. "Jack? Everything alright?"

He flicked his line open to answer Ianto. "Cockroach. Got a tad overzealous squashing it." Wow, he was really bad at lying lately. At least at lying to Ianto.

"Will you be requiring backup?"

Smart-ass. "No, I've got it."

He didn't quite meet Ianto's eyes as he passed him while heading out.

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"Fucking hell..." Owen muttered when they reached their destination.

"Tosh, are you sure this is--"

"Yes," she replied, cutting off Gwen's question. But she checked her readings again to verify.

"What's the problem?" Ianto's voice asked over the comm line. He was monitoring the situation from back at the Hub.

They were tracking three Weevils, and the last coordinates they could pin down had the SUV pulling up in possibly the worst place imaginable. Jack swore. "It's a school." With a courtyard full of children. He parked at the curb and got out, slammed the door behind him.

The other three were right on his heels, Gwen still limping. Which made them three against three since she obviously wasn't going to be any use in a chase. They probably should have brought Ianto along instead, left Gwen with a mop and slime removal duty, but it was too late for that now.

He checked the screen of Toshiko's laptop. The Weevils had split up. "Owen, Tosh, head east, try to cut those two off. I'll take the other one. Gwen, get these kids inside. Now. Move."

They all quickly took off in their assigned directions on foot, Jack, Owen, and Toshiko all drawing guns. Gwen pulled out her badge and started yelling for everybody to go inside the building.

It wasn't long before Jack was following a blood trail. He rounded the corner of the building and found a middle-aged man one the ground, leaning against the wall and gasping for air. His throat had been ripped open. After a quick check of his surroundings, Jack dropped by his side, pressing his hand over the wound. The guy wasn't going to make it.

"Which way did it go?" Jack asked, bedside manner severely lacking, but he needed to take out the Weevil before it got to anybody else.

The man merely gurgled, grabbed for Jack, eyes pleading for help. Jack set down his gun, flipped over the ID badge on the man's coat. Mathew Price, substitute teacher.

"Matt," Jack insisted, "did you see where it went?"

More blood bubbled between Jack's fingers, Mr. Price giving him one last terrified look before his eyes froze that way.

"Shit." Jack removed his hand from the man's throat, sliding it over the sightless eyes, closing them. He reached to retrieve his gun. His fingers barely caught it before Jack was sliding across the concrete, caught beneath the weight of an angry Weevil.

He instantly reached up and shoved against the thing's head, trying to keep bloody teeth from finding their way into his throat next. His other hand grasped desperately for his gun that had skidded along the ground with him but managed to end up just out of reach.

Jack kicked fiercely but failed to dislodge the weight on top of him. Drool dripped onto his face as the Weevil snarled, but he didn't flinch or look away, didn't turn his head and offer a clear shot at his neck. He stared right back into alien eyes, never removed his hand from its forehead, still pushing it away with all the strength Jack had. His fingertips brushed against his gun but couldn't quite grab it, not with the damn Weevil clawing into his shoulder, pinning his arm.

Switching strategy, Jack swung his arm away from the ground, punching the Weevil in the side of the face. Nails sunk deeper into his shoulder and his hand dropped. He reached for his headset. "I could use some backup here!"

"Really not a good time!" Owen's voice shouted back.

The Weevil growled at him, shoved roughly at Jack, scraping his back along the ground. It shook its head, trying to dislodge Jack's hand that was still preventing it from ripping out its prey's throat. The creature pushed him again, unknowingly scooting Jack closer to his gun.

Fingers finally managed to curl around cold metal and grasp, and Jack grinned. He won. He got the gun between them and fired repeatedly. As he kept pulling the trigger, claws from the Weevil's other hand stabbed into Jack's stomach and tore, slicing brutally through both clothing and flesh. Jack gasped at the sudden pain and fired one more time. The Weevil mewled, then collapsed lifelessly on top of him. Jack just lay helplessly beneath it, unable to move.

"Jack?" Ianto's panicked voice asked in his ear.

His headset was still active, Jack realized. They all would have heard the gunshots. He struggled to draw enough air to reply with the Weevil's body pressing down on his lungs.

"Owen, Tosh, do either of you have a visual on Jack?"

Jack didn't really hear any of the conversation after that. He was already losing consciousness. He was also already getting cold. Fuck. He couldn't be going into shock this fast. "Owen... I've got a medical emergency. Could really use that backup right now."

He slid his hand down to his side. There was already a pool of blood, and he was pretty sure most of it wasn't from the dead Weevil. He yanked claws from his aching side and choked back a scream. Blood ran hot and slick over his hand. So much for playing it safe. Owen needed to get to him fast or he was going to bleed out in a matter of minutes.

And this could not be happening. Not now. How had Jack let himself get fucking killed while he was still linked to Ianto?

He fought desperately to stay awake, listening to worried voices shouting things inside his ear that faded into a dull hum. He wasn't going to let himself pass out. He was not going to die. The blackness took him anyway, despite his resolve.

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TBC

Didn't intend to pull a cliff-hanger on you guys, but I'm sure you all saw this coming anyway, so no real surprise there.





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[info]phantomreviewer
2008-01-27 09:25 am UTC (link)
I really want to know what happens!!!

Angst!love

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[info]ffarff
2008-01-27 10:11 am UTC (link)
AGHHHHHH! CLIFFHANGER NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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[info]jigot
2008-01-27 10:17 am UTC (link)
Arghhhh!!!!!! You can't stop there!

*drums fingers impatiently on desktop...*

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[info]lizz_112
2008-01-27 10:52 am UTC (link)
Just stumbled across this series and have spent the last hour reading up on all parts.

AND I LOVE IT!

Hope the next part is up as soon as possible, because I reallly don't like cliff-hangers. Especially when BOTH their lives are at stake!

VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY GOOD series!

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[info]badwolf36
2008-01-27 11:36 am UTC (link)
Hmm, well it will be interesting to see how the link works out when Jack dies again. Looking forward to the next part!

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[info]headnut69
2008-01-27 11:57 am UTC (link)
DAMN!!! Most have more!!! It's just getting good. Your great please more soon?!?!

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[info]sanlynn
2008-01-27 11:59 am UTC (link)
oh crap. I knew it was gonna be a cliffhanger but yipes! Ianto sounded okay but is he really? And even if Ianto survives Jack's death how will Jack get out of explaining this one? Or will he even try?

Wonderful chapter. Can't wait to read more of this terrific story!

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[info]teamane
2008-01-27 01:41 pm UTC (link)
O.O *trembles*

What now? What now? We need to know.
This offers so many possibilities we can not forsee it, so you must update real soon or we'll go nuts!!!!!!!!
Wonderful fic. Love it very much.
:D

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[info]aeron_lanart
2008-01-27 02:26 pm UTC (link)
Hope you don't leave this too long, I'm enjoying the story and I really want to know what happens!

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[info]sarahjane6
2008-01-27 02:47 pm UTC (link)
This story is so good! I knew the segment was going to end with one in peril of death, it has been great seeing how you have handled the story progression. More soon...please, please, PLEASE!

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[info]darketernal09
2008-01-27 04:08 pm UTC (link)
ohgodohgodohgod!

seriously, just ohgod!

*paces nervously, waiting for the next part*

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[info]ambrosia_1
2008-01-27 04:08 pm UTC (link)
NOOOOOO! You can't just leave it there! What a horrible nasty thing to do to a person, making them suffer from a cliff-hanger.

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[info]cyberpunkgrrl
2008-01-27 05:01 pm UTC (link)
Just randomly came across this series, just read the whole lot in one go and now need to go out to see friends but I WANT TO KNOW THE ENDING!!! *lol*

I think this deserves the word GoodBad ;)

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[info]ivy_b
2008-01-27 05:08 pm UTC (link)
Evil cliffhanger! I need to know what happened to Ianto and how Jack is going to explain it.

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[info]capulet_rose
2008-01-27 06:45 pm UTC (link)
Ooh!--Cliffhangers are too mean!

However, I DON'T want to know the ending just yet, because that would mean-- no more story! That would be sad. So-- it can keep going on, and on, and on, and I'll just sit here eagerly checking my LJ for new chapters, like a good little addict. ;-P

You're a wonderful writer!

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[info]seize
2008-01-27 07:19 pm UTC (link)
Christ! I can't believe I'd missed this so far! Wonderful, wonderful fic. You're a good writer and it was a pleasure to read. Off to start at the beginning now!

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[info]seize
2008-01-27 08:09 pm UTC (link)
Just finished my complete read-through, and I've got to say, I'm incredibly impressed with your writing. Plot's a bastard, though, isn't it? I'm just moving through chapter fifteen with my Epic Fic Of Doom and it definitely does slow down after a while. Still, it's totally worth it. You deserve more comments than you're getting, though! I'll going to rec you in my journal, see if that doesn't send a *few* more people your way. :)

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[info]girlwhowasnt
2008-02-01 10:55 am UTC (link)
Epic Fic Of Doom?? And I so shouldn't be asking, because there's no way I have time for something epic, but...

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[info]seize
2008-02-01 02:08 pm UTC (link)
Check my journal. The tag is "In Good Conscience." I also have some shorter things under the tag "drabblesque."

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[info]lost2mercy
2008-01-27 09:03 pm UTC (link)
OMG, this is so incredibly good!!! I've just spent all Sunday afternoon reading all of the chapters you've written so far. Very gripping! And what a cliffhanger! Great writing. I can't wait to read the next part.

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[info]yellowvalley
2008-01-27 09:03 pm UTC (link)
D'oh! Cliffhanger! Bad author, no biscuit!! lol

hanging on to the edge of my seat here.

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[info]girlwhowasnt
2008-02-01 11:21 am UTC (link)
"Bad author, no biscuit!!"

*bottom lip trembles, then starts to cry*

Seriously though, if you keep withholding the cookies, I just might pounce you like a rabid Weevil. I tend to get cranky when I don't get enough sugar. Consider yourself warned.

*sticks out hand and wiggles fingers* Come on, gimme the biscuit... *pouts* Oh, you are so totally gonna make me sing for my supper, aren't you? Bad reviewer!! Bad bad! Oh okay fine, I'll go write.

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[info]just4bri
2008-01-28 12:33 am UTC (link)
Really liking this! You have Jack and Ianto voice down, and the whole concept in the story is quite unique and intriguing. I don't often read WIPs, and this is only the second Torchwood fic I've read, but I will keep reading because it's really good.

Thanks for sharing this tale with me, looking forward to more...

A.J

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[info]veejean45
2008-01-28 01:12 am UTC (link)
Aarrgh! I hate cliffhangers! But (deep sigh) this series is so good that I know it'll be worth the wait...(wanders off sadly).

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[info]tresa_cho
2008-01-28 03:18 am UTC (link)
Aaggghh. Whut D: Cliffhanger! *whimpers*

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[info]mlab555
2008-01-28 07:02 am UTC (link)
I'm so glad I found your fic! I just read all 10 parts in one go. I can't wait to see what happens next!

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YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!
[info]rose_cat
2008-01-28 11:25 am UTC (link)
... but I still love you. More please ASAP :)

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[info]shuffleduck
2008-01-28 03:49 pm UTC (link)
I don't think I've commented on this story yet - but I really have to now because it's just so *good*! And it deserves to be gushed over and praised like mad! :D

I love your characterisations of everyone, Jack and Ianto in particular, obviously, but even the others, like Owen, sound totally 'in character' whenever they turn up, which really keeps the whole story flowing. I love the idea and the plot so far, and I'm liking very much how you write Jack dealing with it all, alone.

So! Looking forward to the next chapter and well done!!

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[info]thaddeusfavour
2008-01-29 01:22 am UTC (link)
While wandering through the cyber jungle looking for crossover fics to read, I managed to stumble upon a pretty good Torchwood crossover, which eventually lead me here.

I'm very much enjoying your fic, though I save the complete read through for when it's finished. So far, I'd say you're doing a good job with Jack's and Ianto's characters. Interesting note, Jack slips into despair as he's dying and, on resurrection and recovery, is nearly giddy with a "What the Hell, I can Beat Anything" attitude. Good progression there. Also, Ianto has a right to be angry. I always thought Supes did Lois a disservice by making her forget about him in the first Superman movie. I mean, it's not right to steal sombodies memories, even if it does make them happier. Wondering how you'll be dealing with that, 'cause Jack needs some comeuppance for this.

Good work. I'll be anxiously awaiting further installments.

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(Anonymous)
2008-01-29 06:59 am UTC (link)
This is a fantastic fic so far- the characters are on cue, the sci-fi element is beautifully meshed in. It's an intense and interesting story.

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[info]frukost
2008-01-30 04:01 am UTC (link)
Oh my god.
I just devoured all ten parts of this. I love it.

But I think you actually just killed me with this one!
Oh my god. That is all.

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[info]speakingsilence
2008-01-30 07:18 am UTC (link)
Just found this, and I'm definitely digging the circles that Jack keeps driving himself in as he tries to figure out the logic of what the glove is doing with the link between him and Ianto and how his own inability to die mucks up the works.

Also, in this part,you hit Ianto's dry humor dead-on with his asking Jack if he needed backup with the alleged cockroach problem. *g*

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[info]demotu
2008-01-30 09:10 pm UTC (link)
Ooh, I just read all 10 chapters off this (and was late for class as a result). I like! Awesome plot, great characterization. There are so many ways you could go with this glove thing. Will Ianto die? Will he come back to life? Will the glove being destroyed kill him, or just separate the link? I can't wait to find out!

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[info]off_suit
2008-02-07 04:03 pm UTC (link)
Just because we saw it coming isn't going to make us whine any less.
Good thing for me I came in late and the next part's up already *grin*

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